My Drama Comment

Yesterday we went into room 11 to do drama. We first did a game calle become an object. We were in groups and had to make an object that used water. The first few times we did it we were in a rush. As we did it more we got more used to it and were able to do it faster. We were really good at it on the last one.

C3 Church Party Collage

This is my collage on the C3 Church Party.

Kiwi Kids News Quiz Results

This is my score. I got 36%. I do not think that this is a very good score.

Statistical Investigation

Pacific Rim was the favourite because 11 people liked it. I think it was the best movie because of awesome special effects, making the big, bulky robots come to life. The least favourite movies were The Smurfs, Harry Potter and Batman. I think that they were the least favourite because The Smurfs are animations, Harry Potter is more of a fantasy than action and Batman is not really a favourite. The movies that are liked by the same amount of people are The Smurfs, Batman and Harry Potter.

Peer Assessment

Recount Writing Checklist - Peer Assessment

Writer:_____________Tim_______________   Assessor:_______________Thomas_________________

Recount Checklist Criteria
My Partner can brainstorm ideas
My Partner has written a hook which captures audience interest levels
My partner includes an orientation throughout their writing
My partner can sequence their ideas clearly
My partner uses capital letters correctly and consistently throughout their writing
My partner can use full stops correctly and consistently throughout their writing
My partner can use describing words (adjectives) in their writing
My partner can use language features - similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia in their writing
I can use words which are more than three syllables in my writing
My partner write in the correct tense
My partner can write in paragraphs
My partner applies spelling rules drop “e” add ing, etc.
My partner can spell all words correctly
My partner can proof read and edit their writing, so that there are not any errors

Self Assessment

Recount Writing Checklist - Self Assessment

Recount Checklist Criteria
I can brainstorm ideas
I can write a hook which captures audience interest levels
I can include an orientation throughout my writing
I can sequence my ideas clearly
I can use capital letters correctly and consistently throughout my writing
I can use full stops correctly and consistently throughout my writing
I can use describing words (adjectives) in my writing
I can use language features - similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia in my writing
I can use words which are more than three syllables in my writing
I can write in the correct tense
I can write in paragraphs
I can apply spelling rules drop “e” add ing, etc.
I can spell all of my words correctly
I can proof read and edit my writing, so that there are not any errors

Drama

Today we did drama. The first thing we did was become. We had to become what Miss Eeles said involving things you do with water. The second thing we did was Freeze Frames we had to make three freeze frames. We got ideas from the photos Miss Eeles gave us. Then we did Survival.

Kiwi Kids News Quiz results

This is my score on Kiwi Kids News. I scored 70%. It is not my best score but is still a high number.

Statistical Investigation

11 people (Including me) liked Pacific Rim as it was full of action. If you have seen Pacific Rim I am sure you would agree.

Homework Week 5 Term 4

My comment to stone fields school

This is my comment to learning hub 3 from Stone fields schools movie for the film festival. I think it was very cool.

My comment to Room 8 St Patricks school

This is my comment on Room 8 from St Patricks school.

My Fotor Collage

This is my collage that I made. My theme is the colour grey.

My Collage on the Tamaki River

This is my collage on the Tamaki River. We walked the whole basin. When we got back to school we were very tired.

Drama

Yesterday we did drama. We were given a card and told to act it out. My group was Latham, Jasmine and myself. I got a bush, Latham got the road and Jasmine got the river. The positive parts of this were we were allowed to make whatever movement we wanted. The negative parts were that Latham was constantly being silly.

Kiwi Kids News Quiz Results

These are my results on kiwi kids news. I got 60%. I know I can do better.

Mary's dilema

Mary woke up in the morning, brushing sleep off her eyes. She got out of bed stretching her bones after only 2 hours of sleep. She had tossed and turned in bed and then looked at the bedroom roof. She remembered when she was a little and she and her family had just moved in.  She was painting the roof with her dad, when she accidentally spilt the paint. Her dad had smiled at her, like he always did when she did something wrong. He picked up the paint and went out of the room to get something to wipe the paint up. She felt a cold fist grip her heart. Dad…… He had died 3 years later of a disease called cholera. Dropped dead in the kitchen and nearly burned the house down. She got up and went to get breakfast. She started to pour the cereal and found the box was empty. She went to her parents room to wake up her mum. “Mum?” No answer. She pushed open the door and put her hand in front of her mum’s face. There was no pulse. She stood at the back of the ambulance and saw her mum wrapped in blankets. She realized that this was her last memory of her mother, a blanket lit up with lights. As the ambulance drove away, she broke down and started to cry.