Bang! The sound of the door slamming was loud enough to shatter your eardrums. Caroline's hair stood straight, as if she had been struck by lightning. She runs into a room and slams the door behind her. A dark shadow looms behind her, and Caroline's piercing scream cuts through the air.
Disgust:
"Everybody run!"
"Save yourself!"
The desperate screams of the students were audible as the repugnant smell wafted through the class and even the teacher was running. Johnny looked down at the bottom of his shoe and saw it. His day was about to become much worse...
These are the two orientations Harry and I wrote for the two emotions of disgust and fear. We tried to use show not tell and simple sentences and even included some dialogue. We used the sense of hearing in the fear orientation and the sense of smell in the disgust orientation. There were different emotions and in the picture it shows them and some adjectives and said words for them.
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