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Friday 12 February 2016

Stretching Sentences

This is Reon's, Jane's and my presentation on how to stretch your sentences. We started with: The boy swam and finished with: As the sun set the Boy swam desperately towards the shore, trying to escape the dark shape that was slowly gaining on him.
Posted by Thomas at 12:03
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2 comments:

Ohhsen said...

Well done Thomas, Reon and Jane. I really like your sentence It is detailed and you have stretched it well.Can you check your spelling.

19 February 2016 at 11:53
Thomas said...

Hi Ohhsen,
Where is the spelling mistake? It would be nice to fix it. Please mention the slide.

19 February 2016 at 12:29

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