My updated Xtra math results

These are my Xtra math results. I am up to subtraction.It is very complicated and confusing and I usually get some wrong.

My presentation on World War 2

This is my presentation on World War 2. I had John as a partner. It as part of our war study and we had 2 weeks to do it in. I think I did really well and I am proud of myself. I can't wait to do it again.

Thomas and John war from Joy Paton on Vimeo.

My update on my Xtra math results

This is my xtra math result. I am on subtraction.It is very complicated and I get some equations wrong most of the time.

My presentation rubric self assesment

This is my presentation rubric. I was being asessed by Fine.I think I did a great job and got a good score.I hope I get a good score next year.

My presentation rubric on Fine

 This is my presentation rubric.I asessed Fine.She had a loud confident voice,gave eye contact and had great information on her topic.I think she did a great job and she deserves a good score.I think she will get  great education later on in life.

Our presentation on World War 2

This is my presentation on World War 2. I created it with the help of my partner John. I hope you enjoy reading it and learn something new. I hope you like it but I just hope there is no World War 3!

My results on Xtra maths

These are my results on Xtramaths. I am on subtraction. It is very hard for me but I always get there in the end.

My Dear Greanpeace freeze frame

This is my freeze frame on Dear Greenpeace that I did with my group. I was the reporter and was interviewing Reon (Greenpeace) who was telling Latham (Emon) that a whale could not live in his pond in his back yard. I like my role as camera man that was filming Reon and cyprus who were talking about Latham and saying that there was no whale in his pond because whales don't live in fresh water but only in salt water and can not be fed cornflakes and bread crumbs. I liked the freeze frame and can't wait to do it again.

My results on Math Magician

This is my results on math magician.I finished it in 26 seconds.I think I am fast at typing as well as getting all my answers right.

My updated results on Xtra math

These are my results on Xtra math.it is on subtraction.It is very hard because I keep thinking that it is addition,but there is always tomorrow.

My time at Eastern Beach

One hot summers day, it felt like I was walking in an oven. It was Monday 4th March. The whole school was going to Eastern Beach.I was so excited I nearly flew out the door.

I arrived in my classroom in the nick of time. We then lined up and went on the buses. There were three of them.There were also parent helpers such as teachers, Mrs Kelly and last but not least my dad.We hopped on the bus and away we went.It took such a long time and I nearly died of boredom. When we arrived we listened to Mr Johnston. Then we sat down under a massive tree. Whoa! It looked like the sky tower. The boys played cricket while the girls played volley ball. I was climbing trees with my friend Reon when Miss Paton said we had to sit down and eat our lunch. After lunch we were allowed to swim in the water.Brrr it was cold! My teeth chattered so fast they would have won a tap dancing competition! The year 7&8 pupils got to go in the kayaks that my dad had borowed from Bucklands Beach Sea Scouts. After an hour of swimming, I got out and got changed. We then hopped on the bus and came back to school. I enjoyed the trip to Eastern Beach it was fun.

My update to my Xtra math result

This is my Xtra math result.I have 10 wrong facts but there is always tomorrow.

My recent update on Xtra math

My Xtra math results

This is my result on Xtra Math.I think I could get faster at answering my questions as well as getting them all right.

The Castle in our Backyard

My results on Xtra Math

These are the questions that I did on Xtra math. I got most of them right and only 3 wrong. I think I could try to get faster at typing in my answers so I can get them all right. 

My results on Are you a Math Magician

My comment on Raymond's African Animal Silhouette painting

This is my comment to Raymond on his Silhouette Painting.

My Little Red Riding Hood Narrative

Little Red Riding Hood
Once upon a time their was a girl named Little Red Riding Hood. She had a red cloak with a hood that her grandma had knitted for her. “I’ll never take it off,’’ she said and held it tight like it was made of gold. She lived in a cottage with her mum in Bunnie Woods although she never saw any. That day Grandma had fallen ill and Little Red Riding Hood’s mum told her “Little Red Riding Hood Grandma is under the weather so can you please take this custard tart and butter to her”. Since she was a very good girl she said “Yes mummy I will”. So little Red Riding Hood took the basket added some things she needed and skipped off into Bunnie Woods. The reason there were no bunnies in Bunnie Woods was a very good reason indeed. In the woods now lived a wolf. He was very clever and sly and every day he ate a bunnie for dinner. No matter how well the bunnies hid he would smell them out. Just by chance the wolf found her that day he was chasing a bunny when he heard something coming. It sounded like footsteps coming closer every minute. The wolf hid behind a bush and waited until the person was very close then he pounced. He was very suprised to see a little girl with a basket. Just then a cunning plan popped into his head a plan so evil there was no word to describe it. So in a very low voice he said “Hello little girl what are you doing in these woods” and Little Red Riding Hood said “My grandma has fallen ill and my mother has made a custard tart that I have to give to her”. The wolf replied “How about I go ahead and tell granny your coming”. “That would be very kind of you Mr Wolf”. Before Little Red Riding Hood could speak the wolf ran off to granny’s house. When the Wolf got to Granny’s cottage at the end of the woods he knocked on the door. “Who is it.” she asked and the wolf replied “It’s me Little Red Riding Hood” the Wolf answered in a soft voice. “The door is on the latch sweetie” Granny said. The Wolf entered. The curtains were drawn so she couldn’t see him properly. When he was close enough he pounced and swallowed Granny whole. The wolf then put on Grannies spare set of pyjamas and lay in her bed. Not long after Little Red Riding Hood arrived at the cottage and knocked on the door. “The door is on the latch sweetie.” Said the wolf in a soft voice trying to disguise his own. So Little Red Riding Hood entered. The Wolf had drawn the curtains so that she would not see his face. The Wolf said “come closer my dear” as Little Red Riding Hood inched forward the wolf swallowed her whole.She uttered one ear piercing scream before the wolf engulfed her. Luckily a woodcutter was passing by and heard her scream.He ran inside and slit the wolfs stomach. Little Red Riding Hood tumbled out and thanked the woodcutter immediately. So she skipped home and on the way she saw some bunnies for the first time for they knew that the dreaded wolf was dead.