This is my ad about a hover bike that we saw in an animation. I tried to make it look as much like the picture of it, so like a real advertisement, if you pay for something and it doesn't look like the picture, you don't want it. We used persuasive language features like saying its hard to resist, the price is really low and only a few words to make it eye catching.
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Well done Thomas. I can see clearly which persuasive language features you have used to hook your audience in but when I read your blurb I see that you haven't drawn our attention to them. Please reword your blurb so that it identifies the persuasive language features that you used. This will help your readers make a stronger connection to your task.
Mrs A,
I think I have mentioned all of the persuasive language features that were used in my blurb.
Yes but what type of persuasive language features are these? (eg - Rule of 3 etc)
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