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Showing posts with label stretching sentences. Show all posts
Showing posts with label stretching sentences. Show all posts

Tuesday, 1 March 2016

Using DRAFT

Stretched sentence:


Who: The boy laughed.


What: The boy laughed hysterically.


When: In the evening the boy laughed hysterically.


Where: At the campfire in the evening the boy laughed hysterically.


Why: At the campfire in the evening, the boy laughed hysterically after seeing his friend slip in the mud and fall on his face.

At the campfire in the evening, the boy laughed hysterically after seeing his friend slip in the mud and land on his face.

This is AJ's and my stretched sentences. We started off with: The boy laughed. and ended up with: At the campfire in the evening, the boy laughed hysterically after seeing his friend slip in the mud and fall on his face. We then used DRAFT to make it better

Friday, 12 February 2016

Stretching Sentences

This is Reon's, Jane's and my presentation on how to stretch your sentences. We started with: The boy swam and finished with: As the sun set the Boy swam desperately towards the shore, trying to escape the dark shape that was slowly gaining on him.